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"rudo" |
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18 Aug 2005 11:28:16 PM |
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im sitting |
hi
im sitting here for hours and im not ding the thins i do
im getting out of shape
im not a writer
if only i could just talk and get it over with so i wont feel bad
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| User: "Elroy Willis" |
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| Title: Re: im sitting |
19 Aug 2005 05:24:59 AM |
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"rudo" <itsoooook@yahoo.com> wrote in alt.atheism
hi
im sitting here for hours and im not ding the thins i do
Who's doing them?
im getting out of shape
Overweight?
im not a writer
if only i could just talk and get it over with so i wont feel bad
Try using more punctuation. Capitalize the first words in the
sentence and put a period at the end. And don't feel squeamish about
using apostrophes. :)
--
Elroy Willis
www.elroysemporium.com
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| User: "Greywolf" |
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| Title: Re: im sitting |
19 Aug 2005 03:01:28 AM |
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"rudo" <itsoooook@yahoo.com> wrote in message
news:1124425696.530925.29320@g44g2000cwa.googlegroups.com...
hi
im sitting here for hours and im not ding the thins i do
im getting out of shape
im not a writer
if only i could just talk and get it over with so i wont feel bad
Hi back.
Guess what? I'm not a writer either. I just cringe at times when I read what
I've written. The grammar is bad and the punctuation even worse. I forget to
delete words or mindlessly omit some all the time. But who cares? You're
forgetting you're in alt.atheism. Need I say more? Just take your time,
collect your thoughts (listen to *me*) and say what you want to say. No need
to feel bad, my man. That is unless that noisy neighbor of yours is a
right-wing evangelical Christian singing off-key again. Now that's something
you should 'really' start feeling bad about. (I'm a joshin'.) Take care.
Greywolf
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| User: "Jez" |
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| Title: Re: im sitting |
22 Aug 2005 08:11:30 AM |
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"rudo" <itsoooook@yahoo.com> wrote in news:1124425696.530925.29320
@g44g2000cwa.googlegroups.com:
hi
im sitting here for hours and im not ding the thins i do
im getting out of shape
im not a writer
if only i could just talk and get it over with so i wont feel bad
Hell, I'm sitting here doing nothing too.
It wouldn't feel so bad if I didn't have a 2" boil on my arse !
A week of Penicillin to go !
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Jez, MBA.,
Country Dancing and Advanced Astrology, UBS.
'Realism is seductive because once you have accepted the reasonable
notion that you should base your actions on reality, you are too often
led to accept, without much questioning, someone else's version of what
that reality is. It is a crucial act of independent thinking to be
skeptical of someone else's description of reality.'-
Howard Zinn
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